literature

faith as a utility

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From the tile of the kitchen floor
Crucifix headstones appear,
Backing this wretch into a corner
Biting my ankles and saying “Christ‘sa comin’!”
The refrigerator throws me a donut for safety’s sake,
Reeled in like a fish on a hook to certainty.
Now hiding in the cupboard with the chips and crackers,
Faith catching on and crucifixions knock on the door,
And from this darkened hole of the cupboard
A twisted mirror stood like the lord.
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upsidedown-insideout's avatar
fantastic write once again, I love the random-read-between-the-lines-it’s-not-so-random-just-coated-in-symbols of it.

Great choice of words also, the flow is wonderful and you seem to build and create moments perfectly, as if telling us what to feel at an exact point.

I love the last sentence the most. You have beautiful way with words, as unoriginal that sounds sorry it does.